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Offline NanofuzerTopic starter

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Midday Disaster.
« on: January 07, 2018, 05:34:00 am »
I woke up on a Monday morning
About to receive a package
When I came down racing
I knew I still had to pack my luggage
For today was the camping trip.

I was certain that I have packed everything right
But only for one thing
I headed back to my room to look for my flashlight
When I saw a severed head shining.

I freaked out and called my parents
They came through and saw the head
I was frightened due to the blood all over my room
As if I was the one lying dead
Maybe next time it will be me.

As the days came
Everything around me turned to hell
I feel paranoid, it's not the same
I guess someday this is a frightening story to tell.


This is my first time making up one of those so don't judge it too bad. xD
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Re: Midday Disaster.
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2018, 07:46:58 am »
the way this is written would make a better story than a poem ((i'm guess basing on the format))

but neat!! you should really make it a short story, maybe add some more descriptive stuff and details and it would be p rad!!

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Re: Midday Disaster.
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2018, 05:59:39 pm »
k, thanks for the feedback xD
I've never really done anything like this before so I guess this is a good place to start learning xD

                                 

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Re: Midday Disaster.
« Reply #3 on: January 08, 2018, 12:16:18 am »
nice
Is the earth is round than why are my feet flat???!!!

 


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