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Offline LucarioTopic starter

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xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« on: August 27, 2016, 04:37:37 am »
Name: xxFranklinxx
Age: 13
Timezone: GMT +4:00
Location of Plot: Default ID 10;15
Building Specialties: I am a quartz builder. I build modern futuristic and more I can build almost anything if I have an exact idea of what Im building 
How long it took to build your application: 7 hrs
How often are you on the servers a day?: 6+ hours :Pixelmon
*Note This build was a random idea that popped into my head and I'm not much of an interior designer*
Hope You Like It =D
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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #1 on: August 27, 2016, 04:48:35 am »
That's a nice project lol

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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #2 on: August 27, 2016, 04:39:10 pm »
Btw This Is a spawn

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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #3 on: August 27, 2016, 07:36:12 pm »
i like it

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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #4 on: August 27, 2016, 07:47:10 pm »
Thanks  :D

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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #5 on: August 28, 2016, 01:31:58 am »
-supported-

Give that guy a Sid (potatoe)

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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #6 on: August 28, 2016, 02:30:02 am »
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Nice Build ;)



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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #7 on: August 28, 2016, 11:01:31 am »
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Nice design, would be great for a server hub or a spawn.

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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #8 on: August 28, 2016, 01:57:47 pm »
It looks good I like it

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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #9 on: August 28, 2016, 03:48:59 pm »
Here goes nothing:
  • From the outside it looks good, gon' give you that
  • The fact that most of the outside, the floor and walls are made of quartz make it kinda boring since there is close to no variety in textures
  • The middle part inside the build - again, too much quartz + I am not sure if it is neccesary, but that's just me
  • The fountains inside - if we ignore the quartz problem mentioned earlier, they don't exactly seem to fit in since the build is mostly black-ish to gray-ish and white and some brown and then suddenly - blue from the fountains
  • The spruce (or dark oak, idk) pathways - since they are really basic, I'd suggest adding some kind of symetric pattern on the parts here:

    Perhaps even incorporate some of the sea lanters for lightning and just that bit extra detail
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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #10 on: August 28, 2016, 05:00:22 pm »
I'm not the best builder to tell this, but here are the things wrong in your build:


1) The white and black are not balanced at all, too much white.
2)For a spawn/HUB it's relatively small. Too small for my tastes, then again my builds tend to be in the big-ish category
3)Pathways are WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY too narrow, should be minimum 3 blocks.
4) Either you aimed for a simplistic build or this is unfinished.
5)This is not modern or futuristic. The building (?) in the middle has a lot of references to Ancient architecture, also fountains are not modern, at least those are not.
6)The color palette does not look pleasing to the eye, it looks like you mashed a bunch of elements together. This build is lacking consistency


Don't take my critique personally, I'm not a good builder, this is just my own opinion.


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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #11 on: August 28, 2016, 05:34:48 pm »
I Did Say I'm Not Good With Interior
« Last Edit: August 28, 2016, 05:50:32 pm by Lucario »

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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #12 on: August 28, 2016, 06:02:17 pm »
The Outside concept is all right. Thought in greatly lacks in colour diversity. The fountains are an eye soar.
Your build also lacks depths and diversity of shapes. This is simply a plain build.

You lack the experience needed... these are my thoughts.

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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #13 on: August 28, 2016, 06:04:51 pm »
I Did Say I'm Not Good With Interior

Interior is a Critical skill to have when building spawns. Not being able to do interiors is a large thumbs down for most people.

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Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #14 on: September 08, 2016, 07:52:29 pm »
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