Username: Password:
collapse

Click on the image to see our list of servers, their status, information and what you can get from voting!

Navigation


- Community Rules
- Discord Chat
- Staff Application
- YouTube Application
- TARDIS Help

* Donate

- Donation Store

Donation/Rank Info
Do you want to enter a custom amount?

* Recent Posts

Suggestion by Kaziku
[Yesterday at 08:14:57 pm]


Ban Appeal by DaySlayPato
[June 29, 2020, 10:59:56 am]


Ban Appeal [DENIED - for now] by PhayZr
[June 28, 2020, 05:40:51 pm]


Buildteam application by Kaziku
[June 25, 2020, 06:06:41 pm]


Best Pizza by XTimeShadowX
[June 18, 2020, 11:38:42 pm]


UzairooYT2007 ban appeal by Dutchy
[June 16, 2020, 09:43:33 am]


Why Is Racism Still A Thing?? by ProWhovian
[June 15, 2020, 12:22:55 am]


Staff Application [Denied] by TheUnknown54
[June 12, 2020, 05:58:40 am]


[Lavalanche]'s Staff Application [ACCEPTED] by Dutchy
[June 07, 2020, 10:57:39 am]


[XTimeShadowX]'s Staff Application [ACCEPTED] by Dutchy
[June 07, 2020, 10:56:33 am]


What's up guys! by Ernestas
[May 28, 2020, 10:42:48 pm]


How's Life? by Lavalanche
[May 28, 2020, 08:29:39 am]


Staff application template and information by Dutchy
[May 26, 2020, 09:24:29 pm]


[GoodGalEpic]'s Staff Application [ACCEPTED] by Dutchy
[May 26, 2020, 09:13:18 pm]


application [DENIED] by Dutchy
[May 26, 2020, 08:27:09 pm]

Author Topic: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]  (Read 4958 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline LucarioTopic starter

  • Stone
  • *
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 5
  • -Receive: 0
  • Posts: 33
    • Skype: xxFranklinxx
xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« on: August 27, 2016, 04:37:37 am »
Name: xxFranklinxx
Age: 13
Timezone: GMT +4:00
Location of Plot: Default ID 10;15
Building Specialties: I am a quartz builder. I build modern futuristic and more I can build almost anything if I have an exact idea of what Im building 
How long it took to build your application: 7 hrs
How often are you on the servers a day?: 6+ hours :Pixelmon
*Note This build was a random idea that popped into my head and I'm not much of an interior designer*
Hope You Like It =D
Images: http://imgur.com/a/1ScaA

Offline Subitize

  • Cobblestone
  • *
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 1
  • -Receive: 1
  • Posts: 24
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #1 on: August 27, 2016, 04:48:35 am »
That's a nice project lol

Lily: I fire you as my hitman.
Me: I fire you as my boss.

Offline LucarioTopic starter

  • Stone
  • *
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 5
  • -Receive: 0
  • Posts: 33
    • Skype: xxFranklinxx
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #2 on: August 27, 2016, 04:39:10 pm »
Btw This Is a spawn

Offline Paganini

  • Cobblestone
  • *
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 0
  • -Receive: 0
  • Posts: 29
  • i eat booty skype: iviosko
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #3 on: August 27, 2016, 07:36:12 pm »
i like it

Offline LucarioTopic starter

  • Stone
  • *
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 5
  • -Receive: 0
  • Posts: 33
    • Skype: xxFranklinxx
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #4 on: August 27, 2016, 07:47:10 pm »
Thanks  :D

Offline Simply MK

  • Retired Administrator
  • ******
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 2
  • -Receive: 19
  • Posts: 511
  • Im like the colour white you see alone but I all
    • Skype: It´s in the yellow pages
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #5 on: August 28, 2016, 01:31:58 am »
-supported-

Give that guy a Sid (potatoe)

Offline TBNRaxe

  • Ice
  • *
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 3
  • -Receive: 3
  • Posts: 67
    • Skype: Crystamyr
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #6 on: August 28, 2016, 02:30:02 am »
-Supported-

Nice Build ;)



Half year anniversary of the Femz <3 2k17

Credits: LoLDeaDZ

Offline Brad

  • Prestige Donator
  • *****
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 0
  • -Receive: 1
  • Posts: 26
    • Skype: brad_d123
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #7 on: August 28, 2016, 11:01:31 am »
-SUPPORTED-

Nice design, would be great for a server hub or a spawn.

Offline Staciee

  • Retired Administrator
  • ******
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 0
  • -Receive: 5
  • Posts: 108
    • Skype: staciee.ann
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #8 on: August 28, 2016, 01:57:47 pm »
It looks good I like it

- SUPPORTED -
"To die would be an awfully big adventure"

"People that matter don't mind and people that mind don't matter" - Payner


Offline Huml

  • Iron Ore
  • **
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 8
  • -Receive: 3
  • Posts: 207
  • A waste of oxygen, deal with it
    • Discord: H-ummel#0164
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #9 on: August 28, 2016, 03:48:59 pm »
Here goes nothing:
  • From the outside it looks good, gon' give you that
  • The fact that most of the outside, the floor and walls are made of quartz make it kinda boring since there is close to no variety in textures
  • The middle part inside the build - again, too much quartz + I am not sure if it is neccesary, but that's just me
  • The fountains inside - if we ignore the quartz problem mentioned earlier, they don't exactly seem to fit in since the build is mostly black-ish to gray-ish and white and some brown and then suddenly - blue from the fountains
  • The spruce (or dark oak, idk) pathways - since they are really basic, I'd suggest adding some kind of symetric pattern on the parts here:

    Perhaps even incorporate some of the sea lanters for lightning and just that bit extra detail
Not quite enough for my support, so have -SemiSupport- instead

Offline Deafh the Drogon Jebus

  • Forum Moderator
  • Ultimate Donator
  • *****
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 8
  • -Receive: 32
  • Posts: 2660
  • Suck my bony bone
    • Skype: Dragonswinger
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #10 on: August 28, 2016, 05:00:22 pm »
I'm not the best builder to tell this, but here are the things wrong in your build:


1) The white and black are not balanced at all, too much white.
2)For a spawn/HUB it's relatively small. Too small for my tastes, then again my builds tend to be in the big-ish category
3)Pathways are WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY too narrow, should be minimum 3 blocks.
4) Either you aimed for a simplistic build or this is unfinished.
5)This is not modern or futuristic. The building (?) in the middle has a lot of references to Ancient architecture, also fountains are not modern, at least those are not.
6)The color palette does not look pleasing to the eye, it looks like you mashed a bunch of elements together. This build is lacking consistency


Don't take my critique personally, I'm not a good builder, this is just my own opinion.


-NOT SUPPORTED-



Is a secret of mine, don't click

(click to show/hide)

Offline LucarioTopic starter

  • Stone
  • *
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 5
  • -Receive: 0
  • Posts: 33
    • Skype: xxFranklinxx
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #11 on: August 28, 2016, 05:34:48 pm »
I Did Say I'm Not Good With Interior
« Last Edit: August 28, 2016, 05:50:32 pm by Lucario »

Offline Canadiart

  • Sandstone
  • *
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 1
  • -Receive: 0
  • Posts: 10
    • Skype: jakegamebro
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #12 on: August 28, 2016, 06:02:17 pm »
The Outside concept is all right. Thought in greatly lacks in colour diversity. The fountains are an eye soar.
Your build also lacks depths and diversity of shapes. This is simply a plain build.

You lack the experience needed... these are my thoughts.

- Unsupported -

Offline Canadiart

  • Sandstone
  • *
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 1
  • -Receive: 0
  • Posts: 10
    • Skype: jakegamebro
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #13 on: August 28, 2016, 06:04:51 pm »
I Did Say I'm Not Good With Interior

Interior is a Critical skill to have when building spawns. Not being able to do interiors is a large thumbs down for most people.

Offline GreyAscendant

  • The Tyrant
  • Retired Administrator
  • ******
  • Thank You
  • -Given: 3
  • -Receive: 55
  • Posts: 699
  • Grey Ascendant
Re: xxFranklinxx's Build Team Application [DENIED]
« Reply #14 on: September 08, 2016, 07:52:29 pm »
DENIED
-LOCKED-
-MOVED-
My hatred and fury is eternal.

I.R.I.S = I require intense supervision

 


Shoutbox

Refresh History
  • Do not discuss ban disputes or any applications in the shoutbox. We do not solve them here!
  • XTimeShadowX: Nerds
    Yesterday at 04:45:36 am
  • rosaline: Ewwwwwww it’s milk
    June 30, 2020, 03:28:57 am
  • Milk: ew
    June 29, 2020, 11:09:02 pm
  • rosaline: XD
    June 29, 2020, 02:36:51 pm
  • rosaline: Ew it’s flash
    June 29, 2020, 02:36:48 pm
  • TheFlash2098: wassup peeps
    June 29, 2020, 11:15:14 am
  • rosaline: ay its potato
    June 28, 2020, 05:11:51 pm
  • DaySlayPato: Uh, wrong grammar XD
    June 28, 2020, 12:38:31 am
  • DaySlayPato: The server where I learned about Pokemons XD
    June 28, 2020, 12:38:11 am
  • zackyzone: damn is payner still here?
    June 25, 2020, 05:28:33 am
  • 994175008: Legendary server <3
    June 24, 2020, 08:42:03 pm
  • Foxpal: damn right it does
    June 23, 2020, 04:52:37 pm
  • Tomz: this place exists still omg
    June 22, 2020, 11:45:08 pm
  • rosaline: Welcome back xD
    June 17, 2020, 06:27:08 am
  • kron195: im alive
    June 16, 2020, 09:22:25 am
  • UzairooYT2007: ok
    June 16, 2020, 09:14:23 am
  • Foxpal: meowdy
    June 14, 2020, 10:04:07 am
  • haley: hi
    June 14, 2020, 08:03:42 am
  • Kaziku: no, no ded
    June 10, 2020, 09:26:56 pm
  • Dutchy: ayy cagr
    May 30, 2020, 07:43:56 pm